I really want to live in my own house which I can design it
by myself. I want a not really big house and not really small house either. A
cozy one with a small garden in front of the house with full of flowers and
other beautiful plants. I don’t think that it needs a gate because the area
where I want to build is very safe and it only has one floor. It has a wooden
doorway and when we enter the house through it, we can meet a cozy
living room with blue sky sofa and a table glass.
Let’s talk about the bedroom. I want to design my own bed
room with a medium size of bed and a big pillow and a big bolster and also a
lot of sesame street’s dolls and a lot of posters of my idol. I also put a cozy
couch to just lay on there and watching TV because I also put a home theater
there.
Next to my room is a simple library which contains my book
collections, a desk and a spinning chair where I can spend my free time writing
there.
I want to make a mini bar in my kitchen with about 6 stools
and a medium unique dining table. The fridge is located in the corner of the
kitchen and of course contains a lot of food.
The bathroom has a cozy bathtub, washbasin and also a
shower. I want to design the wall with full of purple porcelain.
And the last one is I want to make a back yard that I can
use for something like BBQ party. I want
to put some pets freely there like rabbit.
I just give advice, for the second paragraph the word "bed room" it should be merged not separated so the word become "bedroom". And the last paragraph the word "back yard" it case is same with the second paragraph, it should be merged. But overall is very good description about your dream house Nova. (y)
BalasHapusMaybe I agree with adam. You must merge the word "bed room" and "back yard". That is very good description
BalasHapus"I also put a cozy couch to just lay on there and watching TV because I also put a home theater there"
BalasHapusI think you can put "," after TV.
"Let’s talk about the bedroom" academic writing > Let us talk about the bedroom
Very good description (y)
very good description nova...
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